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Comment on 10: Home again, Home again… by Alexander Hollins

Alexander Hollins — Thu, 29 Jul 2010 21:55:29 +0000

Thank you for the read, and for the typo finding! Hope you’ve enjoyed the story so far. As for turning out well… That would be telling. heh heh heh.

Comment on 6: The Three Margarita Lunch by Alexander Hollins

Alexander Hollins — Thu, 29 Jul 2010 21:53:12 +0000

She was actually named before the hurricane happened, and, while it caused a lot of flooding, the definition of a hurricane is wind speed, so I find it rather amusing (and didn’t tag on the name matching until just now when you mentioned it!)

as for multi faceted, he’s not, but such things DO exist.

Comment on 9: Caution, tech at work by Alexander Hollins

Alexander Hollins — Thu, 29 Jul 2010 21:37:49 +0000

Seeing the mention of the Space Needle is how he realized they were talking about state, not D.C. sorry if that wasn’t clear, I’ll have to revisit.

Comment on 10: Home again, Home again… by MilkMachine

MilkMachine — Wed, 28 Jul 2010 15:14:57 +0000

Aww, poor Tom. I hope it turns out well for him.

Comment on 9: Caution, tech at work by MilkMachine

MilkMachine — Wed, 28 Jul 2010 14:59:30 +0000

Hmm, Tom lived in Wash. state, shouldn’t he know that the Space Needle is there and not D.C

Comment on 8: Airheaded by MilkMachine

MilkMachine — Wed, 28 Jul 2010 14:52:23 +0000

Miss Katrina could definitely get on the nerves I’d say. Although that last combination of sensations could have been fun to experience.

Typo: resteraunt= restaurant

Comment on 7: Hot and spicy, to go by MilkMachine

MilkMachine — Wed, 28 Jul 2010 14:43:35 +0000

Interesting twist!!!

Comment on 6: The Three Margarita Lunch by MilkMachine

MilkMachine — Wed, 28 Jul 2010 13:12:52 +0000

I find it funny that a man named for desert wind with an obvious earth nickname is a water elemental, while a lady named for a nationaly known hurricane resulting in massive flooding is a wind elemental. Hmmm maybe Rocky is multi faceted

Comment on 5. State of the artificial by MilkMachine

MilkMachine — Wed, 28 Jul 2010 12:59:30 +0000

Nice, they seem to like to have fun with their sorting out process.

Comment on 4. Steamy Interlude by MilkMachine

MilkMachine — Wed, 28 Jul 2010 11:08:26 +0000

Wonderful, I think I am going to like Deb a lot.

Typo: ‘people will be glad to see we have a dedicated man now in the department now’ a now needs removing.